ACROSS THE VEIL
Fantasy/Paranormal Romance Short
Rating: 5 Cups
Princess Talia has left her home of Summerland to travel across the veil to human earth. Her beloved Keth has betrayed her, and she has no desire to be anywhere near her betrothed, Faldo. Now an actress known as Natalie Thurmont, she is horrified when Faldo shows up again.
Keth left Summerland to protect the Princess. Faldo has also been sending vampires to kill him. Now Keth is called by his beloved Talia, but she only wants to warn him of the dangerous Faldo.
Forced to return to Summerland, the couple must find a way to confront the dangers before them and stop Faldo's destructive plans.
My initial response is “Holy Cow, what a great story!” There are well-developed heroes, an evil bad guy, good background, and enjoyable settings. It is even logical! The romance is great and there is a kissing scene that brings a tear to your eye for the way it shows true love. The dialogue is perfect, and character interaction precise and well thought out. I look forward to seeing how Ms Kessler handles a full length book.
Reviewer for Coffee Time Romance & More