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Carolyn Howard-Johnson
March 3rd, 2012, 12:40 PM
I have been looking forward to working with KarenneLyn and all of you. The day is finally here!

I thought I'd start with a discussion of how extensive the use of query letters is. Too many authors neglect learning more about them once they have snagged an agent or a publisher. They think the work of query letters is done! No, no, no! You'll be a partner in the marketing/promotion/publicity surrounding your book and every time you reach out to a radio host, a newspaper or magazine feature editor, a TV producer....well, you get the idea. It will be query letter time! You can see they're even important in building a platform.

So, here's a little into on query letters from my new (second edition) multi award-winning Frugal Book Promoter (www.budurl.com/FrugalBkPromo (http://www.budurl.com/FrugalBkPromo)).

Your Queryand Cover Letters<o:p></o:p>Query letters arethe ultimate assertiveness-training tool at far less cost than a therapist witha half dozen initials behind his name. ~ CHJ<o:p></o:p><o:p> </o:p>You just about have this publicity thing ready to roll. Your contactlist is growing by the day. You’ve prepared your media release and kit usingtime-honored basics of branding and pitching. You’re almost done except for theimportant cover or query letter.<o:p></o:p><o:p> </o:p>Gatekeepers—folks like agents, editors, publishers, and bloggers—usuallyfirst learn about you when they open a letter or e-mail with your query orcover letter in it. Sometimes you send it to them with only an offer to providethe kit you’ve prepared. Sometimes you use one when you submit your book,articles—even poems—for their consideration or for contests. When that happens,your query must do most of the work of a media kit because the only thingaccompanying it will be your manuscript.<o:p></o:p><o:p> </o:p>You can see, we’ve saved this most important part of your presentationuntil last. Many of the skills you used developing your kit and release willhelp you write a great query or cover letter. It is easier than you think.<o:p></o:p><o:p> </o:p>
For an author, there is little difference between a cover letter and aquery letter. A query letter asks ortells the person it addresses what the author of the letter needs. A cover is an introduction to what isbeing presented. It may not ask for something specific, though it, too, benefitsif you indicate your reasons for sending it.<o:p></o:p><o:p> </o:p>
You might be surprised at how many gatekeepers out there wear more thanone hat. Without information about what you expect, they won’t know what to dowith your letter and it may get deleted or deep-sixed.<o:p></o:p><o:p> </o:p>
So, what do you want? A spoton a radio show? A featured article in a newsletter? To present at a conferenceor tradeshow? To be published? Do you want representation? The list goes on andon. <o:p></o:p><o:p> </o:p>
Of course you want to ask diplomatically. Making gatekeepers’ jobseasier is considerate. It is tactful (and smart) to make them aware that youknow who they are and what they do by naming their business, their TV show, orsomeone they represent. Or by letting them know where you met them or whorecommended them. In fact, that information is a very good opener for a query orcover letter.

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Let's have some fun. And don't forget, later in the week we'll take a couple of your query letters (willing volunteers only! (-: ) , dissect them and see how they can be improved.

Best,
Your trusted leader this week,
Carolyn

Carolyn Howard-Johnson
March 3rd, 2012, 12:47 PM
PS: I'll be in and out of the forum this morning for about an hour--from 10 am to 11 am Pacific time. Then I'll check in later to see what's happened while I'm off speaking to the California Writes Club in San Fernanco Valley. If you live in So. California, consider joining me. It's free. (-:

Mary Anne Landers
March 3rd, 2012, 06:41 PM
Thank you for posting your excerpt about query and cover letters, Carolyn. I especially appreciate your explanation about the differences between the two, and how useful they are.

I'm a no-name writer with some minor credits. Currently I'm writing a novel. Once I finish, I intend to query agents about taking me as a client. Do you have any advice you can give a writer in my situation?

I've written a query letter for this project which I'll be happy to post anytime you request it. I'm sure this query needs a lot of work; I might even have to trash it and start again.

And yes, I welcome criticism from you and the other participants. If I'm doing something wrong, I'd much rather learn about it BEFORE I query an agent!

I'm also looking forward to reading and commenting on the query lettters from other participants. I'll check out your link as well.

Mary Anne Landers