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sjwilling
September 24th, 2007, 11:34 PM
Subtle words, soft shaded feelings
whispering, home,
coming in and holding
you, my love.
Taking you within
my arms I know, I feel
your tender skin and mine
together rub.
The warmth, the hope,
the gentleness,
the sweetness of your lips
as I bend down,
passion
aroused
to envelope them,
with my kiss.

Subtle words, soft shaded feelings,
trailing down
your neck.
With whispered words
a spider's touch
a lick, a nip
and yet....
Further, lower
hunger seeks to sate
upon your breast.
Each salty nipple, sucked
tasted, and gentle,
with love,
respect.
Yet taken in
with passions roused
that lovers can ne'er forget.

Subtle words, soft shaded feelings,
searching, finding,
found
the holy place
of love's true find
the hidden, delicate
mound.
That rises warm,
so secretly
enfolding in its heart,
that which touch seeks longingly
and hope
to rise apart.
Soft lips encircle,
surround, revel
in tastes and scents
of other realms
and to the peaks
of life
to raise
the other of oneself.

Subtle words, soft shaded feelings
snuggled 'gainst my neck
holding,
needing
ever being, here
calm, content.
The intrinsic soul of love
devised, and here
forever in place
The soft words, and feelings,
that describe
my lover's
promised
face.

CharmedGirl
September 24th, 2007, 11:40 PM
Wow that was fantastic DiscoDancingCarrots What a great poem!

sjwilling
September 24th, 2007, 11:44 PM
Thank you :)

Poetry has always been my second love after my story writing. I'm glad you liked it.

S.J.

CharmedGirl
September 28th, 2007, 06:34 AM
I love reading your work SJ it's just so creative. LOL

sjwilling
September 29th, 2007, 07:13 PM
Thanks Bec, that's one of the nicest things anyone's ever said to me.

S.J.

CharmedGirl
September 29th, 2007, 07:58 PM
You're welcome SJ. :)

Posting with you, Dani and Ness is so much fun SJ. I love reading your posts and replying my own funny comments back to you. :lol:

sjwilling
September 29th, 2007, 09:28 PM
Heh seems like we[re on our own tonight.

Just to let you know if I suddenly stop mailing, it'll be cos I've fallen asleep Am hitting the pain killers really hard tonight.

S.J.

CharmedGirl
September 29th, 2007, 11:13 PM
Heh seems like we[re on our own tonight.



Nope not anymore SJ. Dani and Ness are here :lol:

Dani
September 29th, 2007, 11:46 PM
It's a very moving poem S.J.! It makes me wish I had someone.

sjwilling
September 30th, 2007, 12:02 AM
They seem to come along when I don't expect anyone Dani. LOL everytime after I've accepted I'll never find anyone else, it's kinda weird like that.

S.J.

Dani
September 30th, 2007, 01:16 AM
I've been told that before.

I'm not putting myself out there right now either because of my son. I will sometime, but with his problems, it just seems hopeless at this point.

sjwilling
October 2nd, 2007, 03:05 PM
Sorry to hear about your son Dani, I hope he's going to be alright.

S.J.

Dani
October 2nd, 2007, 09:30 PM
He'll be fine eventually. Thanks though. :biggrin: