View Full Version : Summer rain
September 24th, 2007, 11:38 PM
Pittering with patter calls
the cold, light rain of summer falls,
each drop, each scent of nether things
a pine ache heart of rememberings.
So sad the face, so lithe the form,
within these walls that thwart the storm
yet still within the flirelight glows
something sadder, older, glimmer grows.
For wisdom ceases, daylight fades
faces wither into the shades
and nothing but the battered wind
to beat the panes like one who'd sinned
Still more the cries of distant heart
of love asunder, torn apart
revealing not the state of things
but hinting only glimmerings
Yet each day anew, with lively fire
to lift and raise our spirits higher
the simple dew drop fall of rain
to wash and ease our naked pain
Each dew drop moisture gently falls
and past deeds done the memory palls
to cleanse and heal the ancient tears
and wash away the passioned fears
September 28th, 2007, 06:42 AM
I have some fears I wonder how I could wash them away? I would love to get rid of some of them. LOL
September 29th, 2007, 12:39 AM
That was deep S.J.! I just wanna know where you pull your insperation from.
September 29th, 2007, 01:26 AM
Yep that poem was great SJ. Keep the poems coming.
September 29th, 2007, 07:05 PM
Hard to say really, sometimes I just sit here and there's a poem that hits me and I've got to write it. I have a "Poem" state that is completely different from my "Fiction" state.
Yeah odd I know, but then again I'm British, lol
September 29th, 2007, 07:49 PM
There is nothing wrong with being odd :lol:
September 29th, 2007, 09:24 PM
Eccentric :) I don't mind being eccentric. That's a cool thing to be :)
September 29th, 2007, 10:43 PM
Eccentric in many ways, but very cool none the less. :lol:
September 29th, 2007, 10:52 PM
Aaaw thank you.
I do try to be cool and fun. :)
September 29th, 2007, 10:58 PM
You're most very welcome. :biggrin:
October 6th, 2007, 04:44 AM
You're always fun SJ. A real barrel of laughs and the things you post are so funny keep them coming :lol:
October 9th, 2007, 09:45 PM
Thank you. :) I try to be funny in my writing. Life is just way too sad to write serious stuff don't you think :)
October 9th, 2007, 09:51 PM
I totally agree with that.
October 16th, 2007, 12:04 AM
Hehe I just sent my bio for the FF&P elections. I don't think its going to win any votes, I'm hoping the voters will be too busy laughing to vote.
October 16th, 2007, 12:11 AM
What are the FF&P elections?
October 16th, 2007, 10:22 AM
Oh, its the RWA online chapter for fantasy and SF writers. Which includes, i beleive anything paranormal (since they used to come under fantasy and SF)
Volunteered to be put forward as the secretary. LOL
me a secretary?
October 16th, 2007, 03:46 PM
You were wanting a secretary and now you want to be one? Ummm, I think that you've taken some kinda knock to the head. :lol:
Besides, are you going to have time to do that with working and writing?
October 16th, 2007, 03:48 PM
I have no idea, but like I say Only a fool would vote me me with my bio :lol:
I'll put it up here after the elections so you can see what I mean.\
October 16th, 2007, 03:51 PM
October 16th, 2007, 04:25 PM
Make sure you put the bio up on here SJ cause we wanna see it
October 16th, 2007, 05:11 PM
Will do, the poll went up today. It appears I'm the only one nominated for secretary so I have a feeling I might win this one.
I didn't do anything to the opposition, honest.
*Whispers to Dani* Quickly, get Mildred cleaned up for me before the commitee gets here.
October 16th, 2007, 05:25 PM
Okay, will do!
*sneaks off with Mildred and hides her* :lol:
October 16th, 2007, 05:36 PM
Mildred, Oh Mildred, wherefore art thou!"
S.J. wanders around distraught at losing his best friend.
October 16th, 2007, 05:39 PM
Well, you gave her to me to clean up...
she's uhhh, ummm...still getting cleaned. :whistling:
Yeah that's it! :biggrin:
October 16th, 2007, 05:47 PM
Oh Cool, she'll be nice and purty for the negligee I just bought her then.
October 16th, 2007, 05:50 PM
You bought her lingerie? :whistling:
October 16th, 2007, 05:59 PM
:redface: Okay, okay so she's a special friend. :wub:
October 16th, 2007, 06:04 PM
Does your wife know about this?
October 16th, 2007, 06:07 PM
I've sort of introduced them when I had to go and trim, uhm, someone's head, hedge! I meant hedge.
October 16th, 2007, 06:09 PM
Ummmm, sure ya did! :roflmao:
October 16th, 2007, 09:18 PM
Truly, Honestly, Uhm cross my fingers and hope no one finds out about the lie?
October 16th, 2007, 11:49 PM
Too late!! I know! I see all! I told you I was a good detective. :roflmao:
October 16th, 2007, 11:52 PM
Oh, uhm what was my evil octuplet #4 doing here just now?
October 16th, 2007, 11:54 PM
You were the one stating that you hoped no one found out about the lie, so you tell me what he was doing??
October 17th, 2007, 12:01 AM
Lie, he was lying?
Hmmm I'd have no idea, since I wasn't here.
October 17th, 2007, 12:07 AM
Yeah...Uh huh...Whatever! :lol:
October 17th, 2007, 12:11 AM
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