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sjwilling
September 25th, 2007, 12:28 AM
Walking, waiting,
feeling the dew drop rain
fall warmly.
Soft shoulders bared,
two lovers, naked
lying in sweet scented grass
calling love cries
to the silent
empty vale.

Subtle blend of flesh
on green,
Soft breast, feeling
sun touched cool in
the northern breeze as tongue
fastens,
crimps around the nipple
engorged, erect.
Hands feel, slow moving
teasing secret places
holding, stroking
kissing mouths,
lips gleaming, soft
tangible.

Penetrating, hard
and thrusting, rhythyms
beat, with lust for life
and
breathing, panting,
perspiration glinting and shining
breasts, inflamed with
constant teasing,
mouth, tongue ravished,
beating hard,
thrusting filled with giant
sword of flesh,
the time,
the sense of
ever building,
rent.

Then squirting
filling, relieving
needing none
but else
and that was blest.

Dani
September 25th, 2007, 02:15 AM
Beautiful S.J., just beautiful! :notworthy:

sjwilling
September 25th, 2007, 09:56 AM
Thank you.

I always find it hard to judge my own poetry, so comments like yours are like gold.

:notworthy:

S.J.

CharmedGirl
September 28th, 2007, 06:26 AM
That is a really wonderful poem SJ. Absolutely loved it. :notworthy:

sjwilling
October 29th, 2007, 09:00 PM
Thanks Bec. I don't really write poetry like I used to. Odd really.

S.J.

CharmedGirl
November 7th, 2007, 06:34 AM
Well you better keep writing your poetry and posting it here because I love reading it.

sjwilling
February 2nd, 2008, 05:21 AM
Will do Bec!

Hmm, first though think I'll work on that 1001 CTR knights....

:errrr:

S.J.

Dani
February 3rd, 2008, 11:52 PM
Yeah, what's going on with that anyway?

sjwilling
February 4th, 2008, 12:19 AM
Would you believe Mildred and the Evil Octuplets demanded I put them into it.

Geeesh as if they don't get enough press as it is.

:roflmao:

S.J.

Dani
February 4th, 2008, 12:28 AM
Pushy aren't they?

sjwilling
February 4th, 2008, 12:42 AM
Tell me about it, Last night they insisted I work on the 1001 CTR knights until 5am.

They think they're the heroes, Geesh. Evil octuplet heroes. Whatever next?


:cool2:
S.J.

Dani
February 4th, 2008, 12:43 AM
Ummm, Mildred turning into a fairy princess?

sjwilling
February 4th, 2008, 12:56 AM
Possibly, but then again one of the evil octuplets is already a fairy...

:roflmao:

S.J.

Dani
February 4th, 2008, 12:57 AM
Well yeah, but he's flaming. She wouldn't be.

sjwilling
February 4th, 2008, 01:07 AM
Well, I think I can find a nice safe occupation for her. I mean she does purr well and is very cutting edge.

:roflmao:

S.J.