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October 2nd, 2007, 08:21 PM
I'd like to share a poem I wrote for my daughter's pre-school class. They loved it so much, they drew pictures for me as well as had it "published" in their school notebook. heehee.

My fish blow green bubbles
In a flat blue sparse sea
I see them each day
But they don’t see me
When I bathe with them
I sing loud and clear
And I’m sure they’d be glad
That they cannot hear

I clean them each week
Until my fingers are bare
But they do not thank me
For they do not care
They are so colorful
In the sea with green trim
They have bright fins
But they do not swim
So I ask myself why
For I am not certain
Why these fish blow green bubbles
On my shower curtain

:boat: < - - that sort of fits.

October 9th, 2007, 11:37 AM
Aww, that is really cute! My daughter is preschool age and I'm going to read that to her when she gets home. It's catchy. :)

Taryn Raye
October 10th, 2007, 09:35 AM
Oh how cute! I read it to my 4 year old just now and she got a good laugh out of it! hehe Thanks for sharing!

November 23rd, 2007, 09:52 AM
LOL. That is adorable. I can see why the kids loved it. Elizabeth

November 24th, 2007, 11:24 PM
Awwwww, how adorable! I'll have to read this to my son because we have a fishy shower curtain that my son picked out a couple of years ago. He'll get a kick out of it.:biggrin:

November 25th, 2007, 03:35 PM
xmasreindeer the boys loved it we've got a fishy shower curtain as well