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AnneSorgeson
September 13th, 2008, 01:52 PM
I am still fine tuning it. lol But here is the start. :)

Here is the blurb:

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Giving up on one man might lead her to her perfect match.

mrc1685@gmail.com
September 13th, 2008, 01:55 PM
Sounds good so far. Good Luck !!

AnneSorgeson
September 13th, 2008, 02:46 PM
Thank you! That is nice to hear. :)

hollie
September 13th, 2008, 02:49 PM
I am still fine tuning it. lol But here is the start. :)

Here is the blurb:

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Giving up on one man might lead her to her perfect match.


It sounds great Anne

AnneSorgeson
September 13th, 2008, 02:52 PM
Thanks Hollie. :)

joviangeldeb
September 13th, 2008, 03:13 PM
Good start. I like it.

Dani
September 14th, 2008, 12:24 AM
Excellent start Anne! I hope all goes well with it. :biggrin:

AnneSorgeson
September 14th, 2008, 12:36 PM
Thanks Deb. :)

AnneSorgeson
September 14th, 2008, 12:37 PM
Thanks Dani! And don't forget to enter my contest all! I am running one for Pure Magic. Just email me at anne.sorgeson@gmail.com :) See what else comes along with it under my Alphabet Authors thread. :)

AnneSorgeson
October 16th, 2008, 07:48 PM
Okay so I heard back from the publisher and they liked the first three chapters. I had some revisions to do but nothing major. :) I finished up those and hope to re-submit the whole thing tomorrow sometime!!! I am soooo excited!!!! Just wanted to share. :)

Dani
October 16th, 2008, 11:58 PM
WTG Anne!! I hope it gets accepted. :huepfen017:

AnneSorgeson
October 17th, 2008, 09:02 AM
Thanks Dani! :) Me too!!!

AnneSorgeson
December 17th, 2008, 01:38 PM
Well I had to resubmit it. They didn't accept it, the first publisher that is. So we'll see how it goes this time around. :)

Dani
December 17th, 2008, 08:32 PM
Well, that sucks. I hope it does better the second time around. :)

AnneSorgeson
December 18th, 2008, 12:31 AM
Thanks! Just got to keep trying. :)

AnneSorgeson
January 15th, 2009, 10:33 AM
Okay just sent in the first three chapters to the other publisher. <crosses fingers> I am hoping this one goes well cause I heard back less than 45 days. :)

Dani
January 15th, 2009, 11:09 PM
Cool Anne! I'm excited for you.

AnneSorgeson
January 15th, 2009, 11:51 PM
Thanks, they got my submission now I just get to wait another 45 days. <sighs> But the editor was pleased that I had addressed her concerns and I had a reply in my inbox same day. yay!! Now if only I could not bite my nails. lol Off to type up Pure Magic 2. :) Yuppers it's done, well hand written. lol

Dani
January 18th, 2009, 11:36 PM
Cool Anne! It's nice to see that some authors still use pen and paper to write a story rather than a computer (at least the first time around).

AnneSorgeson
January 29th, 2009, 09:29 PM
Yeah I do that. :)