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    MM, Thank you for all your comments and...

    MM,
    Thank you for all your comments and suggestions. It helps a lot.

    Will wanted to tell her it was too late, 'cause it was already being taken care of. Eric Ramos decked out in his full dress...
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    Lesson 4 homework_Janet R 1: O: It clung to...

    Lesson 4 homework_Janet R

    1: O: It clung to perfectly sized breasts and down along her slender ribcage to a vee at her hips where it flared slightly.
    C: It clung to perfect breasts and her...
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    I enjoyed doing the online testing. I find it fun...

    I enjoyed doing the online testing. I find it fun and informative._Janet R
    Past and Past Progressive
    Test 1 exercise 1: 12/14
    2: 9/10 (silly typo)
    3:...
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    Got a copy. I am thinking of taking your...

    Got a copy. I am thinking of taking your punctuation class. I took the comma class, but this seems to cover quite a bit more.

    Janet
  5. Thread: Verbs

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    Thanks MM.

    Thanks MM.
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    I loved this workshop. I highly recommend it. ...

    I loved this workshop. I highly recommend it.

    Janet R.
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    Lesson 3 homework_Janet R. 1. He grabbed Lia...

    Lesson 3 homework_Janet R.

    1. He grabbed Lia and kicked to the surface, towing her to the edge.
    Corrected: He grabbed Lia and kicked to the surface, then towed her to the edge.

    2. He had...
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    Thank you for the comments and suggestions. This...

    Thank you for the comments and suggestions. This really helps. I do think I should add how Will is affected as he watches Lia.

    Janet
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    No questions, thanks MM.

    No questions, thanks MM.
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    Lesson 1 corrections. I can see at least one...

    Lesson 1 corrections.
    I can see at least one sentence that may be too long. And, I left out a hyphen with mid thighs. I changed "the dress" to read "her dress". I underlined those corrections. I'm...
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    MM, My apologies. Both my posts for lesson 1 and...

    MM,
    My apologies. Both my posts for lesson 1 and 2 are way too long.

    Janet R.
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    Lesson 2 homework _ Janet R. When she leaned...

    Lesson 2 homework _ Janet R.

    When she leaned forward into the rail, seemingly unaffected by the wind in her hair or the fact that her dress was now plastered between her legs, Will figured it was...
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    I'm very late in getting going on this class....

    I'm very late in getting going on this class. Here's my post for the beginnings of a wip. I was unable to figure out how to double space when I did cut and paste. My original document is all double...
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    Hi MM, I'm looking forward to this class. I...

    Hi MM,
    I'm looking forward to this class. I always learn so much in your classes.

    Janet R.
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