This is a pretty awesome and inspiring list. Thanks for posting this!

Sorry to be so late. I am running waaayyy behind, I know. I'm working a full time plus job in the DC area and writing to meet a MS request deadline in my 'spare' time. I'm 43 YO, writing an urban...

I am loving this workshop. Some of it I already have down, but some of the tips are great ways to catch typos and brain farts!

This usually isn't my sticking point. I know I have some, but I really have to search for improper apostrophes. I could probably find some missing words, but I'm actually worse about slipping tenses...

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“On the other hand, I might not fail. However,” I drew out the pause dramatically while, in my head, I ran through probable species based on cage size and eliminated a number...

FYI, technically, a sap isn't a billy club. It's a small, semi-soft club. Homemade saps in the twenties were socks filled with rocks, a brick, coins, etc. Fill the foot area, knot the top, and use...

I should have said, it's a word used that way in my current world. I like to give a twist to things using words that people probably know, but don't use much. =D

The narrator is a succubus. The maid/slave probably didn't know, but she knew to ASK someone who knew. It's that kind of place, and the consequences for not delivering something that pleased the...

Original:

It didn’t take long for Armand to set his house to rights. Less time than I expected actually. A few minutes and I sat with two extremely large, extremely strong, and supremely...

It hit Savvy Authors' Yahoo Group list, so you should have a few of us show up. And we are usually good for a few laughs. ;)