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    Thank you for your comments, Kris. She is afraid...

    Thank you for your comments, Kris.
    She is afraid she won't reach the hero in time and I have that information further down (like a page or two). I can easily fix this with your suggestions. Thanks...
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    Pat, Reading your opening was chilling. Awesome...

    Pat,
    Reading your opening was chilling. Awesome job of getting into his mind. I'd have to read the entire book during the day for sure.
    I'd love to know when the book is published. My sister would...
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    Hi Pat, Thank you so much for your comments!...

    Hi Pat,
    Thank you so much for your comments! Tani is the heroine and the warrior is the hero who is cursed.
    Nice to know I'm on the right track cleaning up the story.

    Hugs,
    Tambra
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    Kathleen, I wanted to keep reading. There was...

    Kathleen,
    I wanted to keep reading. There was tension, good flow and delicious conflict.

    Hugs,
    Tambra
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    Hi Kris, Thank you for this opportunity! I'm...

    Hi Kris,
    Thank you for this opportunity! I'm looking forward to reading everyone's openings.

    Here is my opening:
    “Come to me. With all speed...” The words were rough, raspy and urgent.
    ...
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    Hi Kris, Sorry I'm late. I'll try to catch up. ...

    Hi Kris,
    Sorry I'm late. I'll try to catch up.

    This opening made me want to read more. I could feel the tension grow as I continued to read. I was immediately drawn in and wanted to find out what...
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    Thank you, Karenne!

    Thank you, Karenne!
  8. Thread: Hi y'all!

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    Hi Doreen, I noticed on your reading list you...

    Hi Doreen,
    I noticed on your reading list you have Castles in the Air by Christina Dodd. I love all of her earlier historical romances. I've read one of her paranormal series and I liked it as well....
  9. Thread: Hi y'all!

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    Hi JewelSol, Looks like we're all on time and...

    Hi JewelSol,
    Looks like we're all on time and haven't missed anything. Nice to meet you!

    Hugs,
    Tambra
  10. Thread: Hi y'all!

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    Nice to meet you to, Patricia! Hugs, Tambra

    Nice to meet you to, Patricia!

    Hugs,
    Tambra
  11. Thread: Hi y'all!

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    Hi y'all!

    I just found the post about this course. Looking forward to seeing what Kris is going to teach.
    I was afraid I was too late. Glad to see I haven't missed anything.

    Hugs,
    Tambra Nicole
  12. I'm back! I have a new book and news. Let's chat!

    Hello y'all!
    Bring your coffee and let's chat.

    First let me apologize for being away from this wonderful place for so long. Chronic physical issues majorly kicked my butt. I've been on the mend...
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    Hi Rayne, Thanks so much for the critique....

    Hi Rayne,

    Thanks so much for the critique. I'll do as you suggest. I had to search to find a scene that fit your assignment. A bit embarrassed I squeaked by on this one.

    Hugs,
    Tambra
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    Hi Rayne, This is from my WIP Seduced by the...

    Hi Rayne,
    This is from my WIP Seduced by the Darkness. A futuristic romance.
    Caelan is the hero and he is a shifter. His grandmother is The Morrighan, his uncle is Arawn, a lord of the Celtic...
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    Hi Rayne, Sorry, I'm late but I just found out...

    Hi Rayne,

    Sorry, I'm late but I just found out about the class.

    I have 10 short romances published, most of them paranormal, and a fantasy romance novella. All of my stories have suspense. I...
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    Lessons7,8 and putting it all together

    Hi everyone,

    Due to Hurricane Ike, I'm posting this now.

    If you have any questions you can either email me at:
    pookiewilliamson@sbcglobal.net or Yahoo IM me. Last option, you can join my...
  17. Thread: Lesson Four

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    I used to belong to the FF&P chapter. Great RWA...

    I used to belong to the FF&P chapter. Great RWA chapter to belong to.

    I'm thinking positive thoughts your submission!

    Best,
    Polly
  18. Thread: Lesson Four

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    Debbie

    Hi Debbie,

    We write the same stuff. Most of my stuff is Celtic/Scottish.

    Best,
    Polly
  19. Thread: Lessons 5 and 6

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    *****Note I'm in the Houston area and there's...

    *****Note

    I'm in the Houston area and there's a monster churning in the Gulf of Mexico.

    Posting the last lesson could be tricky depending on where Ike hits, so to be safe, I'll post it...
  20. Thread: Lessons 5 and 6

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    Lessons 5 and 6

    Here's the next lessons!

    Lesson 5 and 6
    Characters
    Writing Strong Characters and Viewpoint

    As we discussed earlier characters must have GMC. This will help make
    them strong characters;...
  21. Thread: Lesson Four

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    Hi Debbie, Having a great critique group is...

    Hi Debbie,

    Having a great critique group is worth its weight in gold to a writer.

    Isn't it wonderful that we can go back and layer in details and make our stories richer?

    Best,
    Polly
  22. Thread: Lesson Four

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    Hi Debbie, Thanks for posting! The internal...

    Hi Debbie,
    Thanks for posting!

    The internal can sometimes be harder than the external conflict and motivation. Even in lighter stories though, there does need to be some internal conflict to...
  23. Thread: Lesson Four

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    Hi Rusty, I'm so glad the exercises and lessons...

    Hi Rusty,
    I'm so glad the exercises and lessons are helping.

    What part of stimulus/response is giving you problems?
    Stimulus, response, internalization.

    Or is it the order of the...
  24. Thread: Lesson Three

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    Hi Rusty, Good point about new writers not...

    Hi Rusty,

    Good point about new writers not understanding. Non writers don't understand either. They want to know why I haven't finished a bunch of novels and had them published by New York City....
  25. Thread: Lesson Three

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    Hi Rusty, Nice job of blending the senses and...

    Hi Rusty,

    Nice job of blending the senses and showing.
    Good character and action. I can see the plot and conflict unfolding.

    Love that the witches stood up to the Queen and are bargaining...
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