Zach looked from one woman to another.

"I don't understand," he said, "How could you have not known Pamela?"

"I didn't want to believe that Connor had really loved Lacey and not me. I left...

Shew! That fixed it. I don't know what I was thinking when I put the link in! haha!

I dread the editing too, but I'm like you, once I get into it, I find things and ideas that fit in I wasn't...

I see now why the link doesn't work- I need to change that...I put in my yahoo id rather than my correct one. Will hop over to yours right now. (Glad you clicked it...I hadn't even noticed and it's...

Thanks Christie! I'll check for that request on myspace!

I'm a stay at home mom, which isn't say I don't have a lot to do, but I find a way to fit in writing. Last year was my first NaNo. I did...

I'm doing NaNo Christie! I've already hopped over and added you. This is my 2nd NaNo- hoping for a 2nd "win" this year.

I'm scribbling butterfly over there.

"So what are we going to do with him," Zach asked, turning his gaze to Lacey.

"Well, we surely can't throw him in the ocean. If they find the body, they'll know he was shot and I'm sure they'd...

Time and movement seemed to freeze in that moment. Pamela stared at Zach wild-eyed, her heart thundering in her ears. Her gaze moved to the ground where Marcus lay, blood oozing from a severe head...

"Zach's here too, huh? I take it I wasted a trip to find you," Marcus was shaking his head in disapproval, "Sounds to me like you found another savior to rescue your sweet ass."

Marcus stepped...

Pamela practically tripped down the steps toward the sidewalk, her eyes blurred with tears. Instead she changed her mind and headed toward the sea. It was so dark outside now that she could barely...

Marcus sat in his parked car and wiped the sleep from his eyes. He glanced across the street at the large beautiful house, the sun coming up behind it, over the sea. All seemed quiet in the...

Zach watched precariously from his spot on the beach that allowed him a visual of Pamela and Lacey on the porch. Their irritation seemed to have disipated into laughter and smiles.

He couldn't...

"Marcus Landers?" Pamela asked, hoping beyond hope that it wasn't.

"Yeah, how did you know that?" Lacey asked, looking as surprised as Pamela felt.

"He works for Frankie, but he was trying to...

"How the hell could you bumbling fools let her get away?" Frankie shouted, "Where were you when I got cut off by those freaking truckers?"

He paced the floor in the middle of the hotel room...

"Nevermind that," Pamela blushed, "How did you find us? How's your arm?"

Zach watched her face crease in relief and concern for his well being.

"Been following you since you left the motel in...

Marcus's head was spinning in pain and his back was none the better as he was jostled around. He was still in the back of the pickup truck and it was still in motion.

The ache in his back was...

Oh how cute! I read it to my 4 year old just now and she got a good laugh out of it! hehe Thanks for sharing!

Zach sat in his Miata, the engine purring, watching the motel from a parking lot across the street. He had watched the beating Marcus took, watched as they loaded him back into the truck and drove...

Pamela clamped one hand over her mouth and motioned for Corey to stay quietly in the bed. She peered out into the parking lot. The scene played out before her eyes like a horrible action movie.
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Awww...what a beautiful poem you wrote!!! And the cute little mouse too. I write a lot of poetry myself...or I used to. I think I have somewhere close to 200 that I started writing in my teens and...

The number on the cell wasn't a normal number Marcus had programmed in. Zach wasn't sure, but he'd almost wager a guess that it was a payphone.

"Yeah," he answered.

"Oh so you're up now," the...

The evening passed slowly into night. Pamela and Marcus had managed to move Zach to one of the beds and clean his arm up while he was unconscious. She had ripped up a clean towel and wrapped his arm...

Hello and Welcome!

Ok, cool! LOL It has been fun so far. I enjoy coming back each day to see what's up next.

maybe they could do internet via satellite??

Oh man...are we all breaking that rule about the paragraphs?? We've all written scenes rather than just one paragraph...I'm like IM Cupnjava. I can't stop at just one.

Are we doing ok though? If...