I thought it would be cool to keep the story thread clear of comments and discussion for easier reading. There's nothing quite like a critique in the middle of a story, right? Unless you're an author and your editor has left you the "The hero is TSTL: FIX IT!" note, that is.

Not that it's ever happened to me before. Ahem.

So I've started this thread for comments, brainstorming, etc. Basically anything that comes to mind about the story we're putting together but that doesn't belong in the actual story. Sound good?

That said, we have our first secondary character: Derek! Sounds like a bad, bad man. Wonder what he's up to?