I spent three hours on the phone with my beta reader this evening. She tore my book apart. I so apprecitated that. she's been an avid reader for years and spotted my problem areas and wasn't afraid to tell me, "This doesn't work. It's not believable." or "When he says this, it completely throws me off." This is what I've needed and I can't thank Heather enough for hooking me up with her.
Thanks again Heather!