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    Celtic Knot work: Weaving Together Characterization and Plotting>>
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    Celtic Knotwork: Weaving Together Characterization and Plot
    Copyright 2008 Pollyanna Williamson. Not to be used without
    permission.


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    Hi everyone,

    Welcome!
    I hope you find the information helpful.
    Questions and discussion are encouraged.

    You may know me by my pen names, Tambra Kendall and Keelia Greer.
    I'm published by Red Rose Publishing, Whiskey Creek Press Torrid and Aspen Mountain Press. Two stories are recommended reads.

    I've been teaching online classes about four years now. In the past I've taught for Earthly Charms and various RWA chapters.
    Also, off and on I've taught at our local college's continuing education department.

    So let's get started!
    Polly

    Resources for the course:

    Prescription for Plotting by Carolyn Greene "the plot doctor"
    www.theplotdoctor.com
    Jack M. Bickham: Scene and Structure from Writer's Digest books
    Jack M. Bickham: Writing Novels That Sell. Not sure if this is still
    in print.
    Jack M. Bickham: The 38 Most Common Writing Mistakes from Writer's
    Digest books.
    Dwight Swain: Techniques of the Selling Writer
    What If? Writing Exercises for Fiction Writers by Anne Bernays and
    Pamela Painter
    GMC: Goal, Motivation and Conflict by Debra Dixon published by
    Gryphon Books
    First Draft in 30 Days by Karen Wiesner
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    First Lesson

    Characterization
    Character profile questions and interviewing your characters

    *Exercise and discussion
    Character Charts, Character Profiles and Character Interviews
    Discussion: What did you discover about your hero/heroine/villain?
    If you tried the character interview did you like it?

    Character and plot are tightly bound together. You can't have one
    without the other. As the title says woven together like Celtic knot
    work. How do you start? I find the character chart an excellent
    beginning.

    It lets you see the development of the character as you
    fill in the information.
    Don't be alarmed if you don't have all the blanks filled out. Later
    on you might have to go back and make adjustments or fill in areas
    A story is fluid don't be afraid to make changes.

    On the other hand, if you change too, much you're going to have huge problems. This is a
    matter of balance.

    Character Charts and Interviews

    If you've filled the character charts and still are having problems
    getting to know your main characters, you can do a character
    interview. You can have a critique partner or writing friend help.
    If you work alone, you can do this on your own, so no worries.

    Pretend your sitting across from your character and talk to them. (If someone is working with you, they can ask the questions.)


    Write down what you discover. Many authors have overcome plot
    obstacles/stumbling blocks this way. Hopefully, this is where you
    begin to see how character motivation and plot are connected.

    If you don't have a chart, here are two so you can get you started.

    Fill out for hero, heroine and villain. If you like, add the
    antagonist if it makes him/her clearer in your mind. Since your hero
    and heroine must be strong characters, so much your villain.

    Character Development Chart

    Title of Story:

    Publisher: (or target publisher, if you know this)

    Main character:

    Physical description:

    Personal Background:

    Character Traits:
    3 positive, 3 negative

    Character Tags:
    Appearance:
    Speech:
    Mannerisms/Habits good or bad:

    Character's Greatest Fear:

    Character's Greatest Desire:

    Self-Concept (How does character see themselves):

    Favorite Environment:

    Education/Experience/Skills:

    Internal Motivation:

    External Motivation:

    Character Profile Questions

    Adding Character Profile questions to the character chart can help
    you get to know your character on a deeper level. If you don't have a
    good grasp of your character, there's a good chance you'll have
    trouble when you begin plotting or somewhere down the line things
    will begin to unravel.

    You could end up having a character that is inconsistent and will
    make decisions that don't make sense for the character you've
    developed. Yes, characters are supposed to have conflict but when you
    set up your hero as quiet and mild manner, then a couple chapters
    later he's alpha, some decisions need to be made and GMC: Goal,
    Motivation and Conflict needs to be addressed. We'll go over GMC a
    little later on and how important it is to characterization and
    plotting.

    Characters need to be three dimensional. Don't make perfect heroes
    and heroines. The reader can't relate to perfect and neither will the
    editor or literary agent. This is fiction and making our characters
    larger than life is needed to hold reader interest. Archetypes can
    help in developing characterization. Characters that are not well
    motivated and developed will stall the plotting process.


    Hero Archetypes

    Here's a quick rundown of male archetypes. Check used bookstores for
    books on the subject. Other websites may give you other definitions
    to add to each archetype, so give them a try as well.

    The King, Prince Charming, The Warrior, The Scholar, The Rogue, The
    Seducer, The Minstrel, The Sidekick

    The King: A leader focused on his work. No time for anything else,
    which makes him lonely.
    Prince Charming: This man enjoys life, usually doesn't want to take
    the responsibilities of a higher position but is loyal.
    The Warrior: A man with honor usually is outgoing and brave,
    confident of himself. Another natural leader. Don't challenge this
    guy because he thrives on them.
    The Scholar: Analytical and detached emotionally. One who likes to be
    in control and alone. Thrives on learning.
    The Rogue: He's one who lives his life on the wild side. His past is
    buried and overindulgence keeps him from facing reality. Never stays
    in one place and is always looking for fun. This guy does like to be
    around others.
    The Seducer: Another party guy but with an agenda of conquest. Like
    a con man. His conscience is gone as he focus on only what he wants
    and will do whatever it takes to satisfy his goal.
    The Minstrel: Artsy type, sometimes the lost soul. He doesn't exude
    the charisma like the warrior, prince charming or rogue.
    The Sidekick: He has a heart, shows compassion for others. People
    like him/love him. Values friends and is helpful.

    A note here about Alpha heroes, since they are so popular. Alpha does
    not = asshole. Many romance writers don't understand this archtype.
    From the fabulous, Alicia Rasley (www.sff.net/people/alicia): Alphas
    are men in charge, they are leaders.
    Yes, an alpha can have a dark, dangerous past but it's what he does, the choices he's made that makes him Alpha.
    He has exceptional social skills, empathy, intuition, a commanding
    presence. He's principled and deals with tragedy by seeking control
    over the world around him.

    Character Profile Chart # 2
    Character Profile Questions

    Short Version

    Name
    Age
    Physical Appearance
    Mannerisms/Habits
    General Personality
    Likes/Dislikes
    Occupation
    Height/Build
    Unusual Physical Traits
    Style of Dress
    Talents/ Hobbies/Interests
    Pertinent Background Info

    Long Version

    Name
    Age
    Build
    Eyes
    Skin Tone
    Height
    Facial Features
    Hair
    Way of Moving
    Mannerisms/Habits
    Unusual Physical Traits
    What Does Character Consider Best/Worst Physical Trait
    Voice/Favorite Expression
    Likes/Dislikes
    Style of Dress
    Jewelry/Cosmetics/Etc.,
    Social/Financial Background
    Relatives/Relationship With
    What Was Character Like as a Child
    Family Social/Financial Status
    Home Environment
    Long Version/Character Profile (Continued)

    Education
    Character's Current Social/Financial Status
    Current Friends
    Pets
    Attitude Toward Money
    Religion/Political Interests
    Past Romantic Relationships
    Attitude Toward the Opposite Sex
    Talent/Hobbies/Interests
    House/Apartment
    Decorating Style
    Housekeeping Abilities or Lack Thereof
    Car
    Pertinent Health Info
    General Personality Profile
    Reacts in a Crisis
    Complexes
    Philosophy
    Priorities
    Regrets
    What Does Character Consider Best/Worst Character Trait? Are they
    right? Want/Try to Change?
    Dreams/Ambitions
    Darkest Secret/ Deepest Fear
    Sees Self as:
    Others see character as:
    Conflict with Hero/Heroine

    Exercise and Discussion:
    Anne Bernays and Pamela Painter in What If? Has a great exercise for
    their students to help flesh out characters. The Exercise: First
    work with a story you have already written, one whose character needs
    fleshing out. Writer the character's name at the top of the page.
    Then fill in this sentence five or ten times:
    He (or she) is the sort of person who ____________________.
    After doing this, determine which details add flesh and blood and
    heart to your characters. After you have selected the "telling"
    detail, work it into your story more felicitously than merely
    saying, "She is the sort of person who…" Put it in dialogue, or weave
    it into narrative summary. But use it. (What If? Page 45)

    I'm looking forward to hearing from you.


    Polly




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    Hello Polly, Thanks for the intro and first lesson. I attempted the exercise and have a list but now have to weave this into an excerpt which could take several months before posting I'm such a worry- wort and ponder over a scene far too long.
    Here's the list:

    The dragon-queen Lilith>>
    1.She's the sort of person who, despite her majestic bearing and awesome physical power suppresses self doubts.>>
    2.She's the sort of person who will move heaven and earth to achieve her goal>>
    3. She's the sort of person who suspects the motives in others, but is blind to the fact that she is motivated by evil.>>
    4. She's the sort of person who dominates and awes a crowd.>>
    5.She's the sort of person who manipulates others.>>
    6.She's the sort of person who can't cope with rejection.>>
    7.She's the sort of person who would steal for what she insists are unselfish reasons.>>
    8.She's the sort of person who sees herself as a martyr. >>
    9. She's the sort of person who thinks if it's good for her then it's for the greater good.>>
    10.She's the sort of person who forgives but never seeks forgiveness.
    11 She's the sort of person who would throw a lavish banquet for creatures she hates so that she can revel in their adulation.

    I suspect that this list really only relates to one trait - her self-centredness.
    Thanks for taking a look,
    Rusty
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    Hi Rusty,
    What an awesome list. This dragon queen sounds very interesting.

    You could set a timer for 15 minutes, or even 30 minutes if that works better for you and write whatever comes to mind about this character.
    No editing just write. You can always go back to tweak and polish later. No writer's words are written in stone.

    I have a quote by my computer: It's okay to write a really, really shitty first draft.

    You can't edit what isn't there.

    I put so much emphasis on wanting those pages to be perfect I never got anything finished and was paralyzed by fear.

    If you have any questions, go ahead and post.

    Fantastic job on knowing your character so well.

    Best,
    Polly
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