I'm in the process of writing the second TT for my MacGregor series. The first is due out in April. This one involves Caitlyn MacGregor, who comes forward in time and runs into Blake Drummond. Blake happens to look just like the man who kidnapped Caitlyn in 1603.
I am about 100 pages away from the end and would just like someone to look it over and give me a general opinion. I tend to overuse pronouns. I need to know if the story flows well or if there are holes that need filling.
Thanks a bunch